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Post by riftripper8 on Jun 26, 2017 18:39:57 GMT -8
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Post by miketeaa on Jun 28, 2017 7:43:10 GMT -8
Great demo man. The only this missing is your natural voice as a character (the most important).
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Post by Kyotosomo on Jun 28, 2017 8:50:26 GMT -8
It feels like the whole thing is missing something, I think overall it could use more emotion and expressiveness in the performences (especially for everything before the twenty four second mark). I wouldn't mind the slate at the beginning being a little longer either so we can hear more of your normal voice (your normal voice will act as a good base for directors). You kept it nice and short though (something most people, including myself don't do) which is great. What's interesting though is the different voices got better as time went on, honestly I'd completely flip the voice order because you want all your best stuff at the front rather than the back since there's a good chance regardless of how good or bad you are that the director may not even listen to full demo (maybe not even past the first few seconds if it doesn't particularity wow them at the start)
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