Stacey B
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I Am A(n): Aspiring Voice Actor, Musician
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Post by Stacey B on Jul 14, 2018 19:41:43 GMT -8
Oh goodness. New to all of this, but this is the reel I currently have from when I did a workshop at the end of last year. Any opinions/critiques/what-not are totally fine and dandy. Thank you! My demo reel
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Post by Art VO on Jul 16, 2018 19:59:31 GMT -8
The first cut about "stone of a greedy fool" needs to be cut. It's two milliseconds long, if I round up by 500,000 milliseconds. A confusing start.
The one about "I don't know how to be coy and play games" is a better start. It shows acting but also exhibits your real voice.
The one about the "female titan" is a good second one.
I would remove the "if I'm crazy, I'm crazy" one because of the sh-t. Your playing this in a professional environment. Treat it like going into the office of your boss at your day job. Unless you're very friendly, I don't think you'd say "sh-t" in your boss' office.
The one about "did I do something wrong?" might be a cute ending.
How much were you charged to have this produced, or what was the cost of the workshop and demo together, if I may inquire? Where was this done?
The audio quality and production is nice. You have a good natural speaking voice. I would just rearrange these cuts and drop the very first one, if it was me.
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