This is a good demo! Great energy, intensity, impressive vocal range, really funny comedic timing, believable drama, you showed it all here, in a well-mixed package.
Just don't be the unfortunate fellow who upsets a casting director by needlessly dropping an f-bomb in the demo they play when their kids are in the room. There's a reason we make these PG. Other than that, no complaints here.
Post by LooseCannon on Dec 20, 2016 15:22:34 GMT -8
Thank you for the kind words. That particular scene where I dropped that f-bomb was inspired by Patrick Seitz's demo reel, but I definitely understand where you are coming from and will take it into consideration for the future!
I like the range of characters you have here. Adding on to what Deven said, I'd try to cut this down to less than one minute. Two/three lines of each character then move on. Also, the crossfade between the first and second spot was a little jarring.
Hopefully, all the dialogue scenes where there was more than one voice is all you. If they were, great because they're distinctive characters. If not, I'd try to eliminate them. Don't want someone listening to try and hire the OTHER guy instead. But if you still want to include dialogue scenes, work with someone of the opposite sex.
Post by LooseCannon on Dec 25, 2016 1:01:26 GMT -8
All of the voices were done by me Peter, if and when I decide to have someone in my demo I would probably have a female like you said, and thank you for your critique. I think you are right about the cross fade, I probably could have even done a better spot there in general, but the crossfade could have been a little slower. Thanks again!
Kh4n: Kevin - You got it, friend. I've been glancing through as I wait for project approval. I want to be absolutely sure its ok both as far as your rules, and as far as my dev team's rules too. IDK if it'll be tomorrow or next month though.
Oct 29, 2020 18:58:44 GMT -8
cecelia: new male unpaid request added - very short (:
Oct 30, 2020 6:11:05 GMT -8