starfishva
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Post by starfishva on Mar 11, 2018 23:28:59 GMT -8
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xathien
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Post by xathien on Mar 12, 2018 9:55:08 GMT -8
Here's my quick layman's review! Your starting voice is neat, but I wouldn't put it at the beginning; let us hear an unmodified, natural voice first, since your voice--not the effects--are what you want to present. The choices of sound effects and music was great. Made it easy to listen to. Make sure not to slur between words! "Soldier or a weapon" at the beginning is a prime example, especially if you want to convey the character as having a soldier's discipline. The latter half of the demo, you rely a bit heavily on making your voice squeak/scratch to carry your emotion. I'm thinking of the "car" one (though it did make me laugh), "small, lonely, ugly", and the very last one, "gonna die". Maybe you could swap one of those frustrated ones out for something that lets you express true joy? Show off your vocal range, because it sounds like you've got it!
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starfishva
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Post by starfishva on Mar 14, 2018 9:37:16 GMT -8
I'm still new to this site so I don't fully know how to reply to people properly yet but, Thanks Xathien for the solid advice and critique. I appreciate how in-depth you were with it. Very helpful, thank you
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