Looking for brutally honest feedback on my Commercial Demo!

elijahbaron
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Looking for brutally honest feedback on my Commercial Demo! Jun 7, 2021 17:22:01 GMT -8

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Post by elijahbaron on Jun 7, 2021 17:22:01 GMT -8

Hi VAC! I've been lurking around here for a while and finally got around to producing a Commercial Demo!

I'm looking for ANY and ALL general feedback/critique on recording quality, mixing, and performance so I can improve and make my Demo the best it can be.

Some specific questions if you're willing to answer or can't think of feedback:

What is your impression of my age range, voice type, etc.?

Any segments that don't work?

Any suggestions for replacements/removals of segments?

Anything standout to you, be it good or bad?

Any reworks for the order of segments?

Thanks again for any and all feedback you may have!!

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Looking for brutally honest feedback on my Commercial Demo! Jun 7, 2021 19:09:47 GMT -8

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Post by Studio Yami on Jun 7, 2021 19:09:47 GMT -8

Honestly this all sounded perfect, didn't sound any less professional than the real thing. The only one that I thought was off was around 43 seconds in. You do the 'up-beat excited' voice well, but after a couple of seconds it sounds like you're trying a tad too hard. Like I can almost hear you 'forcing' the happy. It's not INCREIDBLY noticable, and it's only a commercial anyway but, still, something I noticed.

Otherwise, sounds perfect to me!

elijahbaron Member Posts: 3 I Am A(n): Aspiring Voice Actor, Artist, Hobbyist Voice Actor Pronouns: he/him	Looking for brutally honest feedback on my Commercial Demo! Jun 8, 2021 6:59:13 GMT -8 Studio Yami likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by elijahbaron on Jun 8, 2021 6:59:13 GMT -8 Thanks for your feedback and kind words!! I 100% agree with it sounding a bit forced and will take that into mind when recording that read again.

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Looking for brutally honest feedback on my Commercial Demo!

Post by elijahbaron on Jun 7, 2021 17:22:01 GMT -8

Post by Studio Yami on Jun 7, 2021 19:09:47 GMT -8

Post by elijahbaron on Jun 8, 2021 6:59:13 GMT -8

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