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Post by sinclairslick on Jan 7, 2017 11:03:55 GMT -8
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mrbipolar
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I Am A(n): Semi-Professional Voice Actor, Audio Engineer
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Post by mrbipolar on Jan 16, 2017 16:42:53 GMT -8
Let me start off by saying,I see a lot of potential in your clips. I also liked that little bit of southern flair you added to the nox clip. Good job not overdoing it!
Now, as far as clear pronunciation I saw no problem, you spoke clearly and plainly as far as I could tell. What I think you could work on is you delivery.
To me the delivery was flat and lacking in emotion. There was no clear intent to a lot of it and it sounded as though you were reading, I just wasn't feeling it. Try to pretend like you are speaking to someone and not just a microphone. Don't just give the audience a performance of what you're saying, but why you're saying it. Also remember it's not always what you say but how you say it that gets the best results.
All in all again I think you have a lot of potential and I would love to see you continue practicing and working on your performance and growing as an artist.
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Post by sinclairslick on Jan 20, 2017 10:35:16 GMT -8
Let me start off by saying,I see a lot of potential in your clips. I also liked that little bit of southern flair you added to the nox clip. Good job not overdoing it! Now, as far as clear pronunciation I saw no problem, you spoke clearly and plainly as far as I could tell. What I think you could work on is you delivery. To me the delivery was flat and lacking in emotion. There was no clear intent to a lot of it and it sounded as though you were reading, I just wasn't feeling it. Try to pretend like you are speaking to someone and not just a microphone. Don't just give the audience a performance of what you're saying, but why you're saying it. Also remember it's not always what you say but how you say it that gets the best results. All in all again I think you have a lot of potential and I would love to see you continue practicing and working on your performance and growing as an artist. Thank you for your critique! I definitely work on giving it more emotion next time. I know that's something I need to work on
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celewo2
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I Am A(n): Aspiring Voice Actor
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Post by celewo2 on Mar 10, 2017 2:52:52 GMT -8
I don't know if you're still reading this, but I also found your performance to be pretty solid as far as I can tell who's doing VA as a hobby. I also agree with mrbipolar here, you could've given more emotion to your lines, which is why it sounded kinda off sometimes. Not bad, don't get me wrong, but you could've done a little bit better on that part. You have the potential, so don't give up! Be sure to post more of your work
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Post by sinclairslick on Mar 28, 2017 17:59:38 GMT -8
I don't know if you're still reading this, but I also found your performance to be pretty solid as far as I can tell who's doing VA as a hobby. I also agree with mrbipolar here, you could've given more emotion to your lines, which is why it sounded kinda off sometimes. Not bad, don't get me wrong, but you could've done a little bit better on that part. You have the potential, so don't give up! Be sure to post more of your work Thank you! these were done pre-acting class practice so now I can definately feel the conviction my performance was lacking! I have some newer things I've been working on that I want critique on that I'm about to post now that I have some more direction in what I should be doing
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celewo2
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I Am A(n): Aspiring Voice Actor
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Post by celewo2 on Mar 30, 2017 2:40:39 GMT -8
I don't know if you're still reading this, but I also found your performance to be pretty solid as far as I can tell who's doing VA as a hobby. I also agree with mrbipolar here, you could've given more emotion to your lines, which is why it sounded kinda off sometimes. Not bad, don't get me wrong, but you could've done a little bit better on that part. You have the potential, so don't give up! Be sure to post more of your work Thank you! these were done pre-acting class practice so now I can definately feel the conviction my performance was lacking! I have some newer things I've been working on that I want critique on that I'm about to post now that I have some more direction in what I should be doing Oh that's cool that you actually take acting classes! Have you finished your new clip?
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Post by sinclairslick on Mar 30, 2017 19:46:39 GMT -8
Thank you! these were done pre-acting class practice so now I can definately feel the conviction my performance was lacking! I have some newer things I've been working on that I want critique on that I'm about to post now that I have some more direction in what I should be doing Oh that's cool that you actually take acting classes! Have you finished your new clip? I did I posted two different runs at voices I'm trying out in clips and critiques! check them out if you have the time!
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