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Post by FoxDaddy on Feb 20, 2023 6:21:44 GMT -8
Hello, I recently attempted an audition and ultimately did not get the role, but I would like to use that audition for some constructive feedback. I've done a lot of public speaking and I'm even a host on a podcast, so I'm not too insecure about my performance, but I don't think I have the audio editing down, any and all feedback is greatly appreciated
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Post by rjfellows on Mar 13, 2023 10:57:51 GMT -8
Hello,
I'm still new to VO myself, so you can take my views with a grain of salt.
1) I think your editing was fine. 2) I think your line delivery was a bit too fast. 3) You have a strong voice for that type of character, but it felt a little as if you were reading it (I know you were, we all do) rather than living it. Make sense? 4) I think you lacked the passion of a Marine sergeant. You have the voice, and I think that if you injected a bit more gravitas... some anger, disdain, volume (all military sergeants love to use their lungs to their fullest - no matter what branch), you would have gotten the gig.
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